Mutiny

Sifting through blood & marrow
Excavating remnants of my heart
Trying to piece together
The reason for my treason
Nervously sitting upon the judgment seat
Twiddling my guilt away
Beads of blood mix with perspiration 
As the adversary begins to interrogate
No amount of negotiation 
Can save me from my sins
No amount of apologies 
Can erase the pain I've inflicted
Upon so many innocent souls
Time soon reveals herself my enemy
Laying accusation before the jury
Needless sorrow floods the heart
Regret pierces sun dried skin
Cutting sharper than any blade can cut
Frustration finds itself within the constraints of my mind
Leaving me to wallow in mutiny
Before my wake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eggins Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 10:50 AM
I love this write sad and poignant as well so many emotions running through it ... congratulations on being featured this week wonderful write ... kind regards Jayne x x
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September 10, 2009 at 7:35 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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September 9, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Hi Skyy Thanks for sharing your amzing poetry with us. Congrats on feature write! Take care Love Light Trut Patricia
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September 8, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Skyy, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 7, 2009 at 4:11 PM
The regret comes through your words. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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September 7, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations, Skyy, on having your poem featured this week. It is always good to read brilliant poetry like this. And there's always change to rebuild goodness and joy if the chains of error don't constrain the freedom to love fellow-humans kindly, again. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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September 7, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Skyy. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Interesting. Only those that are ill need a physican and only those that have sinned need a Savior.The one who owes the largest debt loves the most. Keep writing
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