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Muted In a Moment

I watched as the panorama found harmony the sky slipped into the white lipped mouth of mountains supplication floated blue turned mute, mixed with Grey’s of twilight, her fingers lightly took one last grasp on Azimuths cowl, then disappeared for the half turn in a depth of silence the first movement of night, was to regain her stolen breath of awe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 5:58:00 AM
Exquisite piece Jayne >> James
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:59:00 AM
Awesome, enjoyed. By the way i appreciate the time you are taking to read me this fine morning. My poetry wannabe's ha ha . I call it that do to the no time and effort I put in to my writes. I also enjoyed the comment you left me on one of my poems.Your quote (" I can tell you we are all different and if we weren't ? it would be a boring site lol ") L.O.L. i agree i have not ran across no one with my style of nonsense. Truly enjoyed your style,..Sidney LeeAnn
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