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Mute Swan

you are my mute swan your flight path towards my song let my tune seduce 25/07/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/19/2018 4:26:00 PM
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Exquisitely beautiful ... wonderful work, Jean! :-) <3
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/19/2018 5:14:00 PM
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These wonderful encouraging comments from the guy at the top mean so much to me Greg. I have been struggling to find inspiration for a long while now. Comments like these give me the kick in the ass I need to keep trying. Much appreciated.
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Warren Doll
Date: 8/11/2018 4:15:00 PM
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Such a beautiful concept and image. Congrats on your win, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/11/2018 4:24:00 PM
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Thank you Warren. It's always lovely to know people are reading my poems.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/29/2018 10:57:00 PM
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This is lovely Jean and a winner! Congratulations! : )
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/30/2018 1:22:00 AM
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Good morning Connie. It's nice to know I can still come up with them. Thank you.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/29/2018 1:12:00 PM
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Congratulations, Jean, this is so magical!
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/29/2018 5:14:00 PM
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So sweet of you to say so Michelle. Thank you.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 7/28/2018 5:27:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. Interesting haiku. :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/28/2018 5:34:00 PM
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Thank you. They say opposites attract Susan.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/27/2018 8:15:00 PM
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Congrats on your win, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/28/2018 3:06:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea. Ditto!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/27/2018 3:02:00 PM
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Jean, congratulations on your awesome 5th place win. This is so beautiful... Hugs Eve
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 6:18:00 PM
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Thank you Eve. I hug you back.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/27/2018 6:28:00 AM
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Lovely piece Jean! Congrats on your win :) xomo
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 8:25:00 AM
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Thank you Maureen.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2018 5:55:00 AM
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Congrats on your win, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 8:25:00 AM
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Thank you Line. Love must be in my air....
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/27/2018 4:54:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win, what wonderful imagery in this haiku.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 5:28:00 AM
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Thank you for the placement Tania.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/26/2018 8:18:00 AM
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What can I say... I'm busy flying your way... Just keep singing... All the best Jean
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2018 8:35:00 AM
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One of the sweetest comments ever Artouo.x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/25/2018 10:49:00 PM
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I appear to be gliding smoothly towards you, Jean, but underneath I'm paddling furiously and I'm missing a shoe :( . Lovely little write. Viv x
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2018 12:35:00 AM
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Typical you!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/25/2018 8:41:00 PM
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Oh, a beautifully seductive and vibrant haiku, Jean. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2018 12:34:00 AM
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Thank you Susan.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2018 6:22:00 PM
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Well done, Jean..they are inspirational to look at.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2018 6:25:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay. Indeed they are.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 7/25/2018 5:43:00 PM
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well done, jean! i enjoyed...
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2018 6:24:00 PM
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Thank you Ilene.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2018 5:07:00 PM
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lovely lines Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2018 5:11:00 PM
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Thank you Jan. Big hug goodnight.

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