Mute Swan

you are my mute swan
   your flight path towards my song
          let my tune seduce


25/07/2018

birddesiresonghaiku

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Gregory Richard Barden

August 19, 2018 at 4:26 PM

Exquisitely beautiful ... wonderful work, Jean! :-) <3

Jean Murray

August 19, 2018 at 5:14 PM

These wonderful encouraging comments from the guy at the top mean so much to me Greg. I have been struggling to find inspiration for a long while now. Comments like these give me the kick in the ass I need to keep trying. Much appreciated.

Warren Doll

August 11, 2018 at 4:15 PM

Such a beautiful concept and image. Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray

August 11, 2018 at 4:24 PM

Thank you Warren. It's always lovely to know people are reading my poems.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 29, 2018 at 10:57 PM

This is lovely Jean and a winner! Congratulations! : )

Jean Murray

July 30, 2018 at 1:22 AM

Good morning Connie. It's nice to know I can still come up with them. Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner

July 29, 2018 at 1:12 PM

Congratulations, Jean, this is so magical!

Jean Murray

July 29, 2018 at 5:14 PM

So sweet of you to say so Michelle. Thank you.

Susan Gentry

July 28, 2018 at 5:27 PM

Congratulations on your win. Interesting haiku. :)

Jean Murray

July 28, 2018 at 5:34 PM

Thank you. They say opposites attract Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2018 at 8:15 PM

Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray

July 28, 2018 at 3:06 AM

Thank you Andrea. Ditto!

Eve Roper

July 27, 2018 at 3:02 PM

Jean, congratulations on your awesome 5th place win. This is so beautiful... Hugs Eve

Jean Murray

July 27, 2018 at 6:18 PM

Thank you Eve. I hug you back.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 27, 2018 at 6:28 AM

Lovely piece Jean! Congrats on your win :) xomo

Jean Murray

July 27, 2018 at 8:25 AM

Thank you Maureen.

Line Gauthier

July 27, 2018 at 5:55 AM

Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray

July 27, 2018 at 8:25 AM

Thank you Line. Love must be in my air....

Tania Kitchin

July 27, 2018 at 4:54 AM

Congratulations on your win, what wonderful imagery in this haiku.

Jean Murray

July 27, 2018 at 5:28 AM

Thank you for the placement Tania.

Arturo Michael

July 26, 2018 at 8:18 AM

What can I say... I'm busy flying your way... Just keep singing... All the best Jean

Jean Murray

July 26, 2018 at 8:35 AM

One of the sweetest comments ever Artouo.x

Viv Wigley

July 25, 2018 at 10:49 PM

I appear to be gliding smoothly towards you, Jean, but underneath I'm paddling furiously and I'm missing a shoe :( . Lovely little write. Viv x

Jean Murray

July 26, 2018 at 12:35 AM

Typical you!

Susan Ashley

July 25, 2018 at 8:41 PM

Oh, a beautifully seductive and vibrant haiku, Jean. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Jean Murray

July 26, 2018 at 12:34 AM

Thank you Susan.

Vijay Pandit

July 25, 2018 at 6:22 PM

Well done, Jean..they are inspirational to look at.

Jean Murray

July 25, 2018 at 6:25 PM

Thank you Vijay. Indeed they are.

Ilene Bauer

July 25, 2018 at 5:43 PM

well done, jean! i enjoyed...

Jean Murray

July 25, 2018 at 6:24 PM

Thank you Ilene.

Jan Allison

July 25, 2018 at 5:07 PM

lovely lines Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

July 25, 2018 at 5:11 PM

Thank you Jan. Big hug goodnight.

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