Mute Mutterings

Mute Mutterings Of Carolyns Confessions Bartender... Pistol packing momma lay that pistol down, as the old song goes:) sounds like the probby was suitably addressed, bullet in kneecap, just a little perplexed, back in ya corner you ***** cos your next, hold on while im sukkin me last cigarette ... on ya cobber, mine....Don The world is in a spiral spin, negative needs reversing in, is the fix another bloody war, blood n death of millions more, yes mankind's mortal sin... very just and kind of words, hope, humanity, not unheard, every man is just a brother, every woman may be mother, on the healthy scale of things. Tony, beware of the deep, the thoughts that creep, memory searches one, shut your eyes n go to sleep , and memory canters some, beware the deep, of thinking some... Bob different views, different states of mind, what is important, to that fellow of kind, some of the spiritual, some money blind, kindness to all doesn't leave us behind? Don Johnson

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Date: 10/27/2011 5:46:00 PM
Don nicely done...hope you don't mind I chuckled a bit...luv shannon
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Date: 10/25/2011 4:57:00 AM
Never too deep Don. Thanks for the thought. Tony
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Date: 10/24/2011 6:52:00 PM
Nance, Long as ya can handle dumber than dum dum, guru or cooru, the goat is a bum, some...
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Nancy Jones
Date: 10/24/2011 7:23:00 PM
yes, sweet, can handle
Date: 10/24/2011 6:37:00 PM
Hey, DJ, will you be my guru? Thanks for your consideration~N
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