Muskrat Malaise

At least the canoers are gone
And the old couple of duck feeders
The geese are reviewing the V formation
Young’uns still practicing take offs and landings
Swans are still strutting about the pond
The coyotes are calling audibles at dusk
Turtles quietly sequestering themselves
Dusk is quieter now
The hum of insect wings silenced
No bullfrog echoes ripple the pond
The sting of November lurks in the woods
An old Muskrat sighs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 15, 2025 at 5:50 PM
this is a stunning creation, John. You captured the atmosphere quite well & the last line ties it all together. Well done.
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