Musk

the power of scent
the fragrance of mother earth...
seduction in mind

Entered Musk Poetry contest
Sponsor  Anthony Biaanco
26/1/2023

deepsenryu

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Jim Slaughter

February 23, 2023 at 11:07 AM

A little too "earthy" for my taste, but it works quite well in this piece, Harry. BOL in the contest.

Michael Tor

February 5, 2023 at 4:28 PM

Lovely Harry well done my friend...

James Marshall Goff

February 5, 2023 at 11:10 AM

Instantly to mine faves Harry! you know I stole that saying from our dear friend Ruben who's not been here for yrs now...again Instantly I think of my community garden plot I return to every yr, can't wait till May! beans, herbs, tomatoes, squash, sunflowers & more! & one of my fave scents!

Deb M

February 1, 2023 at 11:20 PM

Lovely Harry…Debx

Jennifer Proxenos

February 1, 2023 at 7:49 AM

What an excellent Senryu, unfortunately the can be's will always seduce mother earth, for greed is the only thing , the scent of power and money, which circles in their sad lives and loveless, hearts, pure and unadulterated selfishness. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Ann Peck

January 31, 2023 at 5:01 PM

Beautiful, Harry!

Michelle Faulkner

January 28, 2023 at 12:48 PM

I do love the fragrance of the earth after a rain storm, it seems so fertile, promising a new birth, a fresh chance~

Jim Slaughter

January 27, 2023 at 10:49 AM

Musk is a bit too "earthy" for my taste, Harry, but I do like this piece. I cannot, however, for the life of me, understand what Connie P. finds "seductive" about Elon Musk...!! BOL in the contest.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 26, 2023 at 2:25 AM

there is nothing more aromatic than a spring shower when the leaves are budding. I have a plum tree which, funnily, don't laugh at me, I talk to and. I love the aroma around it when I do. I am sure she gives me more juicy plums because of it.