Musk

Excuse me if I come across as brusque,
but you exude a certain pungent musk,
as though you’ve grown up with the wildebeests,
or recently discovered ancient yeasts.
And so for your forgiveness, I do hope;
I really meant to stifle that last laugh.
For Christmas, I have given you some soap;
I find that it works wonders in the bath.
I also think you’ll have a better year;
in fact, I’m sure it will be quite improved
when not beset by all those rutting deer
and every other animal that’s hooved.

————— for the Musk Poetry Contest sponsored by Anthony Biaanco written on 12/20/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 9:55 PM
I like the 'elan' in this poem. ~ Elon M.
Villalon Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Cute!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Funny! A deer hunter?
Kyser Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 6:36 PM
It's that time of year!
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