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Music Please

Play a song for me
My heart longs to be set free
Held captive so long 
I am trying to be strong
Is the instrument all wrong?

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Tonytocaa Camacho

February 24, 2015 at 12:26 PM

Very nicely worded Sharon,don't think its all wrong,you might just have to find another tune lol. Thanks tonytocaa

Daver Austin

February 23, 2015 at 10:51 AM

What is the instrument of the captivity? I like the challenge of imagination here. Congrats on the selection. daver

James Fraser

October 25, 2010 at 6:28 AM

Sometimes we just need the right note to restart Sharon, and so many out there are waiting for that note. It's a matter of finding it > have a lovely day >> James

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

October 23, 2010 at 2:08 PM

Music can sure help relieve some of the tension when going through hard times. But sometimes one has to do something very drastic to bring up a change that could free you. Nice write, though sad, but no one will have a problem relate to this. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.