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Music of the Night

Is it the nightingale, regaled a muse, Enchantment of her lips — a poem? Her brown-chiffon wings reverberate. Nutrients of the earth in her open beak. “Sing, my darling, of pure sweet pleasure.” Palms pressed to their hearts, Hansel and Gretel eat up the breadcrumbs of sorrowful souls. 6/19/2020 ON BROADWAY Poetry Contest Sponsor : Nette Onclaud

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Date: 8/25/2020 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write/poem. I love your last line. Enjoy your win and day.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 8/23/2020 1:05:00 PM
Just enchanting, Kim - enchanting as the nightingale song. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 6/20/2020 8:58:00 PM
A wonderfully creative poem, Kim! I love the dreamy imagery. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Rhonda <3 Kim
Date: 6/20/2020 8:09:00 AM
What a great write Kim. Love how you pulled Hansel and Gretel at the end.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne! <3
Date: 6/20/2020 5:23:00 AM
Enchanting as nightingale's song dearest, Kim. Good luck! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! hugs...Kim
Date: 6/19/2020 11:14:00 PM
Absolutely enjoyable and very beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Best of wishes, Evelyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/19/2020 10:12:00 PM
Outstanding Kim and love and wishes for a top win in Nette's Contest. Panagiota xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2020 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!

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