Music of the Evening

The quaking aspens shake their silver leaves 
like paper bells as evening breezes 
dance across the lake's gray surface, 
stirring gentle swells 
that splash the pebbled shore. 
The coo-hoo-hoo of owls is like a love song 
softly sung among the shadows 
of the branches high above. 

The descant of the sighing breeze, 
the rustle of the trees, 
the owls' low harmonies accompanied 
by the timpani of rocking water 
on the bow of anchored boats 
are all melodic notes that play 
the unique music 
of the evening.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 3:44 PM
outstanding imagery; your poem is captivating; I especially liked: The descant of the sighing breeze, the rustle of the trees,
VanHooser Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 2:38 PM
Hi Sara, thank you for your kind words, I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem, particularly the imagery as it was something I wanted to be powerful. I love nature and the power and beauty always leave me awed. Thank you again, Ron
Smith  Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 12:41 AM
Nature in the evening is spellbounding. The colours gradually fading as some go to bed others wake up. The owl the herald of the night.
VanHooser Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 11:49 AM
Hi Alison, the inspiration for this poem came from a night spent on the shores of Lake Tahoe. I love nature and that night it was on full display, I sat in awe just appreciating the world around me. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your kind words.. Ron
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