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Music of Love

Music of Love

On cloudless, starry, starry nights,
you sit on your moonlit patio,
under the cool canopy of Royal Poinciana trees
showing-off their flamboyant scarlet petals.
Cradling your beloved cello between your legs, 
you plunge into a vortex of musical love. 

Skillfully drawing your bow, you fine-tune her;
testing for perfect fifths, you arouse her. 
She thrills you with every expert caress 
flowing from your fine, familiar fingertips, 
so intimate, sensitive, and silky soft.

Tenderly titillating her, you bewilder 
even the stars with your playing, 
as the most melodic, harmonious music
breathlessly, seductively emanates from her soul…
more melodiously profound than the sweet,
nocturnal song of an amorous nightingale.

Together you two eviscerate the ills of the day
as you embrace her close to your heart,
plucking and stroking her sonorous strings. 
An ardent lover, you tantalize her, 
releasing a dulcet, celestial sonata 
that causes even the passing breeze
to shimmer and quiver in jealous ecstasy.

Charmed, captivated, and curious,
as if sipping wine from the Holy Grail,
you thirst and hunger to delve and discover
the essence of her innermost secrets. 
Lovingly romancing her with every touch,
she senses your love is not fallacious;
for like warm molasses, her music melts…
seeping into your brain, your heart, your very being.

And your soul passionately pulsates with the pure,
rhythmic melody of your cello’s divine voice.



06-17-2018

Contest:     Eight Word Challenge – 7 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:     John Hamilton
Placement:  1st


8 Words:
Fallacious, Eviscerate, Curious, Bewilder, Plunge, Tantalize, Vortex, Scarlet




Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/9/2018 9:39:00 PM
I love the seductive abilities of your writes. They are indeed intoxicating. takes me from myself as you never stop amazing me Love you my sweetheart
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/11/2018 1:25:00 PM
Hi Al, I am so delighted by your sweet compliments. Thank you so much for all your encouraging words and wonderful support! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/9/2018 12:38:00 AM
Wow! This one blew me away. I'd love to see and hear this in person, Pandita. It seems your talents are limitless:)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/10/2018 7:37:00 AM
Daniel, it is so sweet of you to leave me your awesome compliments! Thank you so much, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 7/8/2018 3:46:00 PM
No wonder that this superb poem is climbing the top ten of the best poems list...congrats, Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/8/2018 5:22:00 PM
Vijay, thank you, my dear poet friend, for all your encouraging words and wonderful compliments! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/2/2018 1:42:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Pandita! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/2/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thank you - thank you, dear Sandra, for visiting and leaving me your kind congratulatory words! Wishing you a beautiful day. Pandita
Date: 7/2/2018 11:08:00 AM
Pandita, back to say congrats on your win. I knew this would do well. John
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/2/2018 2:25:00 PM
Hi John, thank you kindly for your vote of confidence and kind congratulations which brought some sunshine my way today! Have a great day, my friend! Pandita
Date: 6/30/2018 12:09:00 PM
Congrats Pandita..I am delighted to see you win at the top of the podium.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/2/2018 2:07:00 PM
Hi Vijay, I very much appreciate your lovely congratulatory words! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/30/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful well-written poem using all 8 words so brilliantly. :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/30/2018 8:14:00 AM
Hi Susan, great to hear from you! Thank you for your wonderful compliments! Have a great day, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/29/2018 6:37:00 PM
Masterful Pandita, nothing else to say but congrats on a shared first place!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/29/2018 11:31:00 PM
Hi John, I am so delighted and honored to place so high on your list! I'm happy you liked this piece. Thank you very much! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/20/2018 9:11:00 AM
As always my friend, you gift us with wondrous poetry! This shiny beauty is another magnificent example of a true and great poet's heart and soul! A fav ...
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/20/2018 9:16:00 AM
Robert, as always I am thrilled to receive your lovely inspirational compliments! Thank you very much for your encouraging words! Hugs and love. Pandita
Date: 6/18/2018 1:46:00 PM
Like your words, good luck!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/18/2018 1:48:00 PM
Hi Allan, thank you so much for kindly commenting on and complimenting this piece! Have a beautiful day! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 6/18/2018 1:46:00 AM
Wow...Just wow!!!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/18/2018 10:55:00 AM
Hi Ray, great to hear from you! Thank you for your wonderful compliments! Have a great day and keep on writing! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 9:11:00 PM
Excellent poetry, as always, Pandita..your charming words are destined for a BIG win..well written, indeed!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/18/2018 10:43:00 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you for your delightful praises which continue to encourage and inspire me! Have a beautiful day, my friend! Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 6:13:00 PM
wow, this is a GREAT job you did using the eight words. A very sensuous poem of personification. I bet it will score HIGH!!
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:48:00 PM
Hi Andie, as always I am thrilled to receive your lovely inspirational compliments! Thank you very much for your encouraging words! Hope your weekend was filled with love and sunshine! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 5:39:00 PM
"Pandita your personification of the cello is absolutely beautiful.. It left me breathless while reading.. Exquisitely written!! Superb work!! Many blessings to you.."
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/17/2018 5:56:00 PM
Hi Robertina, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece and thrilled to receive your superlative, complimentary words! Thank you so very much!! Hugs and blessings. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 4:05:00 PM
Pandita, You describe a melody that is like no other, with this musically seductive write..best wishes
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/17/2018 4:42:00 PM
Hi Joseph, thank you so much for your wonderful complimentary words! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 1:36:00 PM
Beautiful verse Pandita, you used those words very well, I'm guessing that you are a musician . Tom. Good luck
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/17/2018 4:40:00 PM
Tom, thank you kindly for your lovely compliments. While I am not a musician (like some of my family members), I have a great appreciation for music and enjoy attending symphony orchestra concerts on a regular basis. Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 12:08:00 PM
Pandita, you made the cello come to life in this beautiful sensual personification. Very nicely done! I believe this should do well in the contest, best of luck. John
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/17/2018 4:34:00 PM
Dear John, I thank you for your delightful compiments. Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 11:47:00 AM
Now everyone knows you can feel the music! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/17/2018 12:02:00 PM
Hi Rico, thank yu so much for kindly commenting and complimenting this piece! Have a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/17/2018 11:17:00 AM
This is so beautiful Pandita, such a serene feeling whilst reading your words... You used the words very well...
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/17/2018 12:01:00 PM
Many thanks, my dear friend. You know I always cherish your lovely compliments! Have a great Father's Day! Hugs and love. Pandita