Raul Moreno Poet Choka

Music In Silence

Expressing passion
Through majestic concertos,
His work reaches out.
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His work reaches out
Trying to touch the heaves,
His hearing goes deaf.
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His hearing goes deaf
He continues composing,
Music in silence.






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Note* inspired by Beethoven.

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Tyler Martin April 27, 2009 at 10:38 PM Beethoven must be your musical muse. You favor him in youyr beautiful words.

Abe Lopez April 18, 2009 at 12:19 PM Clever and sadly true, amazing..

Tyler Davis April 17, 2009 at 11:53 PM Nice, you must listen to Beethoven when you write.

John Weber April 8, 2009 at 12:35 PM Again, the progression of the form is utilized to wonderful effect here, Raul! Beethoven would be most proud. Warm regards, John.

Brian Strand April 8, 2009 at 12:50 AM Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Raul.Rgds Brian

Cheryl Mccall April 7, 2009 at 7:25 PM Even thoes that are deaf can hear the music..Congrats on your write

Barbara Gorelick April 7, 2009 at 7:04 PM Well done Raul..he is one of my favorites. Its a mystery how he was able to continue without his hearing. Amazing. BG

Nadia Shahwan April 7, 2009 at 6:35 PM .....I'm editing my third page of MonaLisa.

Sharon Winter April 7, 2009 at 4:35 PM Wow. And you are inspiring us. Amazing. Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2009 at 2:51 PM Excellent writing, Raul. It is mystifying how Beethoven could still compose great music even after he lost his hearing. Well done! Love, Carolyn

John E Wordslinger April 7, 2009 at 2:19 PM I like this style of poetry, it's new to me . I like the way you made this one

Laurie Ginn April 7, 2009 at 1:09 PM ...awesome... hey check soup mail

Charmaine Chircop April 7, 2009 at 12:58 PM nice tribute-excellent

Carrie Richards April 7, 2009 at 12:48 PM It is so hard to imagine that someone could write such amazing music,.....and to only hear it within his own mind....so incredible...! Nice tribute to one to whom we should be so grateful ..forthe gift he left behind.

Nadia Shahwan April 7, 2009 at 12:11 PM Fascinating..I do like this choka.

Frank F. Atanacio April 7, 2009 at 12:00 PM brilliant like Beethoven