Music, Distant

The music on our lips
Was dripping slowly
Down into the depths
Of the Forgotten.

Your enchantment was never
Better than at a distance.
When I cannot 
See you
Feel you
Hear you
Need you.

That’s when I love you most.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 9, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Danne! I love this! Goes to my favs! You will have fun, find friends and growth in your art here! Peace, Audrey
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December 28, 2009 at 10:41 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danne. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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