Music

In heart it touches Entry fast exit slow Refreshes, rebuilds Energy en lighted In moving mind With fast face Rolling rushing Heeling heartless Man mourning Results Rejoice. by:- Vrushani Thaker

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Constance La France

Date: 7/28/2010 1:21:00 PM

This is a very interesting poem form ~ I have never tried this myself ~ but I think I will give it a try ~ well done

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/28/2010 8:30:00 AM

Nice to read your Poem and it’s a pleasure to know that you hails from India too Ahmadabad. Thank you for your comments on my poem Rains have come. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.........V Thaker.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/25/2010 8:36:00 PM

A nice write with Alliteration.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2010 2:43:00 PM

What a nice poem on the joy of music! SO nice to have met you, Vrushani! I think in English we never put an r after a V. that must be why I thought your name was Virushani first time I wrote you!

John Monteblanco

Date: 7/25/2010 12:35:00 AM

This poem is AWESOME!!!! Personally I love this poem because of love music as well. Keep on writing and have fun with it.