Vrushani Thaker Poet Alliteration

Music

In heart it touches
Entry fast exit slow
Refreshes, rebuilds
Energy en lighted
In moving mind
With fast face
Rolling rushing
Heeling heartless
Man mourning
Results Rejoice.

                          by:-
                          Vrushani Thaker

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Constance La France July 28, 2010 at 1:21 PM This is a very interesting poem form ~ I have never tried this myself ~ but I think I will give it a try ~ well done

Ravindra K Kapoor July 28, 2010 at 8:30 AM Nice to read your Poem and it’s a pleasure to know that you hails from India too Ahmadabad. Thank you for your comments on my poem Rains have come. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.........V Thaker.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 25, 2010 at 8:36 PM A nice write with Alliteration.

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2010 at 2:43 PM What a nice poem on the joy of music! SO nice to have met you, Vrushani! I think in English we never put an r after a V. that must be why I thought your name was Virushani first time I wrote you!

John Monteblanco July 25, 2010 at 12:35 AM This poem is AWESOME!!!! Personally I love this poem because of love music as well. Keep on writing and have fun with it.