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July 11, 2024

"Tanka-Acrostic" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Music

Melody from flute
Unwraps my immersed feelings
Senses touched divine 
Innermost emotions surge
Cadence fills the air sublime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Music"  Acrostic write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 10:04 AM
Thanks, Paula. Really appreciate your uplifting comment.
Agustin Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... God bless you.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 2:49 PM
This sounds like it is written by someone who really likes the flute. Beautiful thanks. Congrats
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Thank you, Andrea. You are right - I love flute!
Meadows Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 5:37 AM
This is lovely. Well done.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Daisy. Really appreciate your lovely comment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Hello Mala, I enjoy the flute music it has a relaxing sound. Love & Friendship, Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Hello Mala, You are welcome. enjoy your qweekeend. Love& Friensaship /Darlene/
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 11:10 AM
Dear Darlene, Thank you. Really appreciate your thoughtful comment.
Jones Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Nice! Good luck in the contest!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Thank you, Karen. Appreciate your visit.
Blown Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 6:17 PM
.....wrilte on.....sounds a description of my daily radio listening.........easy listening classical and smooth jazz .....stan sand
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Thank you.
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