Iolanda Scripca Poet Free verse

Museum of Lost Souls

I sank my fragile being in delights of dew 

Waltz on cheeks of people, through mosaic of eyes 

I also whispered HIM, when He tried to rain 

My secret bits of wishes... returning to the fields 

 

I dove into abyss so to revive with grace 

and let my deer absorb me surviving drought of soul 

But Keeper of The Cage allows me only be 

A maze of salty traces on lifeless eyes of beads... 



for HGarvey Daniel Esquire's Contest "Personify A Tear "

written as a teenager and translated now ....

by: iolanda scripca

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2011 at 4:39 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Iolanda. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels April 22, 2011 at 1:12 PM Hey there Iolanda, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) hope your weekend will be a good one.. love Wilma

John Freeman April 22, 2011 at 12:07 PM Great to see you in the winner's list, Iolanda. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet April 22, 2011 at 11:10 AM Congrats Iolanda!Beautiful poem.-kash

Dr.Ram Mehta April 22, 2011 at 4:31 AM congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Iolanda

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 21, 2011 at 10:18 PM Dear Iolanda, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 8th Place win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG

Joyce Johnson April 21, 2011 at 9:57 PM Congratulations on your beautiful poem and win. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 5:15 PM Good one..Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara

Wilma Neels March 31, 2011 at 12:13 PM This is quite a moving write Iolanda, wishing you all the best with this gem, love Wilma

Marymkilker Marymkilker March 31, 2011 at 10:13 AM Wow this is really good

Carrie Richards March 31, 2011 at 7:21 AM Oh my goodness, Iolanda! you wrote this as a teenager??!!! You must have been born with a poem on your sweet lips...to have such a deep passion at such a young age...I am speechless!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 31, 2011 at 4:12 AM Lovely personification of the tear in so few a verses, Iolanda