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Murder On Oahu


husband’s humor schtick
hanauma bay snorkeling
tosses frozen peas
tropical fish swarm my space
visibility zero
 
7/23/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2020 at 3:23 PM

ha!! It looks like someone is on a vacation?? Wow. Lucky lady.

Kim Rodrigues

July 24, 2020 at 3:46 PM

I wish! Just dreaming!

Caren Krutsinger

July 23, 2020 at 7:26 PM

I imagine that was fun!

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 8:46 PM

Was crazy!

Gershon Wolf

July 23, 2020 at 5:31 PM

I like how you set the scene for the murder without the graphic gore. Nice finesse job; very subtly penned! Cheers, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 7:07 PM

LOL! Right?!

Janice Canerdy

July 23, 2020 at 2:32 PM

Oh, wow! Did you get him back?! Good poem. Janice

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 3:13 PM

LOL! I didn’t know he was going to do it. He was young and daring! ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

July 23, 2020 at 1:26 PM

Oh, I can just imagine you being surrounded by hungry fish, Kim! Your poem is delightful to this old fisherwoman. Do you live in Hawaii like Connie? Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues

July 23, 2020 at 2:10 PM

For 3 years in the 1980’s. Aloha! ~~~~