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Murder On Oahu

husband’s humor schtick hanauma bay snorkeling tosses frozen peas tropical fish swarm my space visibility zero 7/23/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2020 3:23:00 PM

ha!! It looks like someone is on a vacation?? Wow. Lucky lady.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2020 3:46:00 PM

I wish! Just dreaming!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/23/2020 7:26:00 PM

I imagine that was fun!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 8:46:00 PM

Was crazy!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/23/2020 5:31:00 PM

I like how you set the scene for the murder without the graphic gore. Nice finesse job; very subtly penned! Cheers, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 7:07:00 PM

LOL! Right?!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/23/2020 2:32:00 PM

Oh, wow! Did you get him back?! Good poem. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 3:13:00 PM

LOL! I didn’t know he was going to do it. He was young and daring! ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/23/2020 1:26:00 PM

Oh, I can just imagine you being surrounded by hungry fish, Kim! Your poem is delightful to this old fisherwoman. Do you live in Hawaii like Connie? Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 2:10:00 PM

For 3 years in the 1980’s. Aloha! ~~~~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/23/2020 11:57:00 AM

... visibility zero :))) ... well done, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2020 1:11:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!