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A frayed nail loneliness hovers there up in the cobalt evening's heaven, screaming Curved like a cat's claw it scrapes the sky down, down, night's batten clouds hover, cover, screaming Some sounds bring only silence, stoke the fear of loneliness within this clay shell, screaming No one's here so who can really hear, tell, of the pain the hang nail moon relates screaming Dixdeux O See About the Poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/3/2014 4:19:00 PM
ok, I got it. AWESOME that you did this new form, Debs. I really likes it.
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:51:00 PM
gosh, Deb, this one is so deep. How can it be for me?? Then I saw the picture you've shown, and I understood. It reminded me of myself when I feel like I am going crazy!! So what inspired you to do this? Or did I say something that made you want to write this? Anyway, fantastic imagery, my friend!!
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