Mummy

I once had a dream that I was a mummy
Don't ask me why But it wasn't funny
  I was scared out my mind
  Where is this place and this time
When I woke up I felt like a dummy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 1:07 PM
falesha, when I saw mummy, I thought for sure you were gonna use a rhyme about the baby in your tummy. haha. But you came up with other good words instead! good limerick form! LUv, andrea
Belt Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 10:50 AM
I woke up and my wife said I was a dummy.....Great Limerick.......Larry
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 9:01 PM
A fine limerick. I enjoyed it
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 5:28 PM
Great Limerick..That would be somewhat of a nightmare...That could compare to being trapped in a life situation bound and can't get free..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 5:07 PM
funny one--good job
A  Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 4:47 PM
A funny one . Thank you. Enjoyed .
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Very cute Faleshia and don't rush it.. I have 4 sons and started as a teen MUMMY so its a joy and lots of work to be one ... easy reading on a Sunday evening... luv.. Linda-Marie
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