Mummy-Do My Hair

“mother”said jolly “can you comb my hair,” “I will” Jolly “if you stand on that chair,” “your golden tresses make nice pony tails,” “red ribbons, if you please, to match my nails!”
1st placement Written 12/March/2021 Eve Roper sponsored Nursery rhyme 2 4 lines rhyme 10 syllables each line
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Date: 3/23/2021 11:01:00 AM
This is so Lovely Krishji... Congrats on your win.. God bless... ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/23/2021 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Ani.Nice to have your visit!
Date: 3/21/2021 3:23:00 PM
this is so cute Krish, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/21/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Jan! pleased you like it! Cheers!! :)
Date: 3/20/2021 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish, in my Nursery Rhyme2 contest. A great verse for little children to remember and learn . Please visit my blog on the contest. Nursery Rhyme 2 Contest. - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/20/2021 9:15:00 PM
Dear Eve Thank you! delighted you like it! Should find a way of publishing these as new nursery rhymes with colourful pictures! great idea for a contest!!
Date: 3/20/2021 12:04:00 PM
A great picture of childhood, Krish! Congratulations on your win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/20/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Sam! something witnessed as I had three sisters!
Date: 3/20/2021 10:28:00 AM
- Back with congratulations :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/20/2021 9:16:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise! much appreciated!:)
Date: 3/14/2021 6:22:00 AM
- A cute rhyme poem for children, Krish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2021 8:05:00 AM
thanks Anne-Lise!:)
Date: 3/12/2021 9:35:00 AM
this one I liked even more, Krish . It sounds very much like a cute little nursery rhyme simple for a child to learn by heart!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/12/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. Yes. I felt children should be able to learn and recite easily! glad you feel that way too!
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