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Mumble Jumble

Mumble Jumble Write poem I Will Excite word and Thrill Concern a Doubt Learn must verse bout Dig this brain Spike Big this challenge Like Work hard to Think Lurk me to Ink Feel the words Drive Deal staying Alive Wear that top Hat Care that top Cat Eager writes Read Meager to Concede Worried for Outcome Hurried I did Some Need me not Fret Greed not this Bet Between friend a Test Preen then we Rest

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Date: 8/23/2016 3:30:00 PM
haha, someone down here called you Yoda. It really does seem like Yoda talking . fun poem
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Ronald Kent
Date: 8/23/2016 8:41:00 PM
This was written when I didn't mumble, now I do. lol thanks for commenting Andria. They rhyme on both ends by the way most missed that.
Date: 7/25/2016 7:30:00 PM
I swear you are Yoda...I like this, good work.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/25/2016 8:03:00 PM
Kind word have you, much thanks me thinks.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:55:00 PM
Ronald, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/10/2016 1:54:00 PM
Just found this comment and others, lol a very belated thanks.
Date: 8/22/2013 9:27:00 AM
Very cleverly done Ronald! I just had to read it in all its forms, then read it again. I especially like the message in the poem - writing is definitely a serious venture that concerns many. Well penned.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/10/2016 1:58:00 PM
It works from left to right and right to left can't remember why I wrote it but thanks for the comment years ago. lol