Mum

In the womb my golden days,
warm with twin and thump of
mother’s heart, give a kick

Now and then, good for friends
and family ahh!
not hungry ever: want for nothing

Here with twin: we have a little dance
amniotic, you might say, and often
acrobatic, give us a twirl and I’ll

Be your partner in our chromosomal
twisting, umbilical, fluid-trance;  Ahh!
so many words, images, thoughts, but

No language yet, to put a name to our
uterine caper; so I think in images:
ha ha!...clever or what?  But he, the

Other one, in our mischief made,
just floats around; yes floats! 
I kid you not:
(how long can this last?)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 18, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Peter, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
Yvonne Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Wow, this one is really different. A very interesting read.
Pinet Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 8:16 AM
You have a whimsical poem well written that flirts with the mystical trappings of conception and birth. Emile. #7
Holmes Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Thanks Emile!
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