Multiplication Table

When Noah gathered creatures pair by pair In a barge ready to face the rough storm Giraffe and wife joined a sail to nowhere; As waters growled high, till moon grew deformed With nothing to frolic with, amidst the flood Giraffes delighted in hush of ashen dark Mating frequently on arc's trodden halls. New animals born, how can they embark And others followed despite bold rainfalls The Lord shocked, watching full procreation Said He, “ I forgot this extra supply Count the babes ,while I slow the sea’s motion, Why did I say, go forth and multiply?” .................. For Robert Heemstra and Poetess Darkly's Lessons In Life Are Funny Contest by nette onclaud
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Devnath  Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:45 AM
It's excellent piece without doubt. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Nette a stunning poem gl in contest Shadow x smiles
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 1:03 AM
very nicely done, Nette. For some reason I was thinking this was a couplets form contest. Hope I am wrong about that! I enjoyed this one's cleverness.
Sivey Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:31 PM
You have dipped me into that honey for a treat of this delightful write my friend! You took on this contest and conquered it with this witty and intriguing poem...You are a supreme poetess Nette! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! I definitely loved the quote of the Lord in your last stanza, that was very well thought out and well put! What a tremendous poem, Great work!!
Mohammed Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:12 PM
I found the rhythm and flow very well woven together in this comely piece.So refreshing to read a poem like this after a hard days work.All the best in the contest friend.
Kendrick Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Cute one..Reads like a winner to me..That would nave been an interesting voyage indeed...You have made it seem more interesting with you approach....Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
Poet Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 2:24 PM
Hey love this!!A great take on the contest theme!
Ober Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 1:53 PM
Wonderful job! Some really great rhymes in this one. Love that last line!
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 12:57 PM
- One summer we were at the mobile home vacation - was parked in a zoo area. - When I sat on the toilet, a giraffe stuck his head through the window .... I was terrified ...... lol. (true) - Nice to read your poem Nette. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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