Multi-Di-Minstrel Message, Reprisal

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Salutations! Are we all just a figment of GOD's imagination? Or just a simple angle of schematical equation. Perhaps, we’re just a footnote in God’s mental thots? He’s gotta BIG BANG Universe to run, does He not? Are we all flashing back on one of God's holy hallucinations? Walking on water, EGGSHELLS! Raise Cain! Raising you know what and who! Are we all just a spark in God’s expecting spectacular speculations? Or a One-time ticking timebomb from nuclear annihilation. Are we all just a coat God puts on His “quotations”? Keeping us in order with anti-inflammation. Rambling hypocrisies, babbling Biblical prophecies. Or are we all just simply subjects of our own bad inventions? Subjected to the whims of fanatical sabbatical radical intentions. Getting lost in a crowd, getting lost at Sea, Dead to the world. What’s to become of me? I’m only one but I’m not alone. I’m only one... one amongst millions and millions of Billions! Who all call Earth HOME! Don't we all call Her home? Billions who just aren’t me! Yet sorta look like me. But do they think like me? Do they love life? Do they seek out the truth, new life and Lady Liberty? Peoples who wanna share, peoples who wanna care, peoples who wanna dare To have a positively positive outlook on life! Wanna little betta Light to Sunshine on, you, see? Wanna betta lifeboat just to stay afloat, indubitably? Are they capable. Of being civilly chivalrous, acting responsibly? There’s nothing wrong with wanting to be freee! Free from the scrutinizing eyes of oppression and tyranny Free from the sympathetic lies of social suicidal tendencies. Are we all just a sing-along of one of Gods’ songs unsung? Justa tryin to figure out whatta hell is going on. Or are we all just a song in a Godsong sing-along? Just tryin to figure out what da hell is going on. What if ... We’re NOT all just figments of God’s imagination But possibly, there's no other possible rationally obtained explanation For all the misconceptions and misinformation ordained! Are we all really looking forward for this final absolution? Over population, crime, world domination, slimed, improper pollution Best to jest to keep on singing songs And just keep on blindly playing along With God fearing reindeer games. Oh my, time flies ... The Dreamer never dies!

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Tom Woody

Date: 3/25/2025 7:05:00 AM

Well, I can't say I agree with the sentiments expressed but it makes for some unique poetry Ben

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 3/25/2025 11:12:00 AM

Still a work in progress. Almost finished! I've been rehashing this little ditty of a song over and over for the last few days, well, since Sunday. I can barely get any sleep. Wish me luck.