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Mulberry trees and Butterflies

One day in May, I sat nearby a stream where a few mulberry trees were flourishing. I rested my head against the trunk of one where clusters of white comfrey grew nearby. Beautiful yarrow were also scattered there, with pinkish-purple bells; some were yellow. I must have fallen into a dream because I saw the stream was rippling with fizzy sounds of bubbles. The stream was pink champagne! The flowers around me performed a ballet, swaying delicately in the breeze as the bells of the yarrow rang a dulcet tune. I woke up all a sudden, noticing that many leaves of my mulberry tree were not leaves at all. They were actually butterflies coral streaked. I’d startled them on waking, and a cloud of them fluttered all together away from my tree. Other bright butterflies joined the throng, partaking of the nectar of the once-dancing flowers. Although the stream no longer bubbled champagne, the reality of mulberry trees and butterflies was more breath-taking than what I ever could have dreamed.

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Date: 4/3/2025 12:42:00 PM
Andrea, sounds like and describes like a very pleasant experience. Nothing wrong with this sort of dreaming and waking. Wish it happened to me, but I'll just have to settle for imagining it. Smiles!!
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Date: 3/28/2025 9:39:00 PM
This is really nice. Congrats on your winning placement.
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Date: 3/28/2025 8:26:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/28/2025 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem
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Date: 3/28/2025 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write you have here. I enjoyed reading it. Spring Blessings To You.........
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Date: 3/28/2025 10:37:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Andrea with nature at its perfection.
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Date: 3/20/2025 7:55:00 PM
I think you have yet to cease amazing me each time I come back to your work. This was well penned. I had some therapy with EDMR, and one of the cycles makes you focus on a place you imagine is your safe place. My safe place was something like this, but more moss and old trees.
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Date: 3/20/2025 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem Andrea nature and all it's beauty.
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Date: 3/20/2025 9:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem with great imagery.
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Date: 3/20/2025 8:08:00 AM
Andrea, a WOW from me; this is your pen at its best. Your imagery and lines grab, hold and smoothly deliver delightful awe to readers. I simply and completely LOVE this poem ... CayCay
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Date: 3/19/2025 11:19:00 PM
Wow! A pink champagne stream and lovely butterflies! I want to visit this place! Bet you win the contest! Best wishes. When I wrote mine I was uninspired so it is kinda weird lol.
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Date: 3/19/2025 9:27:00 PM
Lovely, a wonderful poem for Spring reading - :)
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Date: 3/19/2025 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful ,Wish you the best
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Date: 3/19/2025 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem as always Andrea!
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Date: 3/19/2025 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea. You really write your poems with vivid imagery. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/19/2025 1:34:00 PM
thanks, Oliver

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