Muddy Mires

Muddy Mires
He is like a tree planted in muddy mires
which yields no fruit in any season
and whose branches have tattered withered leaves.
Whatever he does fails and pulls others under.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 8, 2010 at 8:48 PM
Congrats on being featured. Rhonda Hero
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July 6, 2010 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Marie. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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July 5, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Congrats Marie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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July 5, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congrats Marie, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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July 5, 2010 at 7:39 AM
I really like this one and enjoyed reading your featured work..Sara
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July 5, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Many congrats on your feature and win in Johns contest. Rgds Janette
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July 3, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations Marie on your win in John Freeman's contest "Redneck Psalms,Improve Human Foible". Love, Carol
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July 3, 2010 at 6:06 AM
Congrats Marie on your winning poem in the Redneck Psalms contest with these wise words and awesome advice... enjoy your big win my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..AlohA..
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July 2, 2010 at 11:55 PM
congatulations, Marie. Just like a proverb! LUv, Andrea
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July 2, 2010 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations Marie on your 6th place, Agape, Moses
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June 30, 2010 at 5:49 PM
well done, funny poem, hope to not be the one in muddy tires.
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June 30, 2010 at 12:03 PM
mARIE I LIKE THIS POEM.REMINDS ME OF MINE. NICELY DONE.-SKAT
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