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My first sleepover was when I was almost eight, camping with my friend. Our tent wasn't store-bought, just a tarp wrapped around some stacked-up bails of straw. We lived on a farm; did I mention that before, or did I skip that? Anyway, we did; and that's how we went camping when I was a boy. We weren’t set up yet, when suddenly, it's raining and we're getting soaked. My friend's mom got us and rushed us into the barn, all muddy and wet. She told us straight off we'd have to sleep in that barn; so I ended up sleeping in a stall. I still smile when recalling that experience.

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Date: 8/7/2023 3:21:00 PM
Hello Emile, Oh that is one camping trip you will never forget. At least you were able to get dried off from the rain. My friend. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:33:00 PM
Hello Emile, this is a good memory you have of that time spent in the ban on the diet floor. My friend enjoy your evening . /Darlene\
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2023 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, it was a long time ago, but you're right I haven't forgotten it, have a great day my friend; Emile.
Date: 8/6/2023 11:06:00 PM
That's touching
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2023 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Curie; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Date: 8/6/2023 4:37:00 PM
It compleated the camping experience.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/7/2023 9:21:00 AM
Thanks; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

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