Mud Star

Our star.
Feel its sting?
The little dingy one
with jagged edges
in the basement of the universe.
The star that winks... sashays ...
Relentlessly teasing- then merrily slices away. 
          Our star
Hear it careen like molten dreams.
The lost one that mimics a 2 am ambulance.
The one that offers fruit
then sends you crashing to the reef... 
         Our star
Smell it?
The one that passes perfume. 
Beneath the fragility of "self-worth". of your gravity.
Then jerks it all away. 
          Our star
Once a blooming evening flower.
Now nibbled ran. Down to the stump.
Face down in the cold black soil,
          Our star has turned to mud!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 4, 2014 at 3:40 AM
It's always sad when our goals are not met, Anthony, and we feel like we've bombedout like a star comprised of mud. Been feeling that way myself. Thanks for sharing. Love, carolyn
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