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Mud Star

Our star
Feel its sting?
The little dingy one
with jagged edges
in the basement of the universe.
the star that winks... sashays ...
relentlessly teasing- then merrily slices away. 
          Our star
Hear it careen like molten dreams.
The lost one that mimics a 2am ambulance.
The one that offers fruit
then sends you crashing to the reef... 

A smiling spittoon to purge the poisoned 
glass from your bombed out sheltered soul.
         Our star
Smell it?
The one that passes perfume. 
Beneath the fragile being of self-worth of your gravity.
Then jerks it away. 
          Our star
Once a blooming evening flower
now nibbled raw..down to the stump.
Face down in the cold black soil,
          Our star has turned to mud!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/4/2014 3:40:00 AM
It's always sad when our goals are not met, Anthony, and we feel like we've bombedout like a star comprised of mud. Been feeling that way myself. Thanks for sharing. Love, carolyn
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