Mud Puddles

Fell into a mud puddle
trees are laughing just now
birds falling from their nest
thinking it funny.

As for me, maybe it is
mud puddles are always
where you step.

wrote 9-16-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Buys Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 5:02 PM
Made me smile, so very true, not only in reality but also metaphorically. Well done. Regards Heidie
Jordan Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 7:53 PM
Better watch them James they have a way of always being in the way - God Bless
Winter Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 3:11 PM
I think I know the feeling. Sometimes anyway. Great little write. Love, Shar
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