Mud Puddle Muddle

Mud Puddle Muddle Why must mud puddles always be Just sitting there in front of me? Calm and still in sunlight’s flash Inviting me to make a splash. And why do I, though dressed for school, Just wade right into this muddy pool? To make mud pies and muddle muffins, A make believe turkey with muddle stuffin’. Somehow the mud moved here to there From my shoes into my hair From head to toe, I’m a muddy mess - I tried not to, I tried my best. And now my dog’s in here with me Oh, what a messy sight to see. My dog, who used to be so clean, Covered with a muddy sheen, Covered in a grayish brown That used to be part of the ground. And then as doggies always do He shook and all that mud he threw Muddy droplets every place On my dress, in my face. So I threw some mud on him And then, my dog, he shook again. I hear the school bus down the street But the mud won’t let go of my feet. I need some help with what to choose Stay in the mud or lose my shoes. Who are these children who can resist The invite of a muddy tryst, Can wait contently for the bus to school Without jumping in this muddy pool? When I get home, I’ll be in big trouble Take a bath that will have to bubble And I know it’ll happen again Because “mud puddles are for jumpin’ in!!” John G. Lawless 6/3/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/13/2015 7:40:00 PM
I got a giggle out of this. My girl is in kindergarten. The spring she turned two, I took her outside with her rubber boots on, pointed her to a puddle and let her at it. People would stop and stare. I said, its just mud, she's happy and we have a bathtub. LOL... she is going on six now. Still loves puddles, but she's not into mud so much. I thought I'd let you know I've posted two poems on blogs with your contributions. 1) Farmhouse 2) Badlands Ben. I know you were curious about the results. :)
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Date: 3/25/2015 6:36:00 PM
john, it was so interesting how one thought seemed to lead right into another one and the whole thing read just like a child's thoughts about mud puddles should be!! Cute one!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/25/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I wrote this one for a kindergarten class after three rainy day with no recess. The teacher was amused....but concerned.
Date: 3/22/2015 11:55:00 PM
Absolutely awesome write! Brought r back in time to childhood days. A 7! :)
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John Lawless
Date: 3/25/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Laura and for the high mark
Date: 3/22/2015 8:53:00 PM
I LOVE IT!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/25/2015 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Sharlott, glad you enjoyed it.
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