Notes About The Poem

Image result for the big lebowski

Mud Puddle

Mud Puddle 

Has life handed you a kidney stone, Old Timer?
Does the world treat you like a dead gnat in it's oatmeal?
Some days, do you feel like a mud puddle in an ocean?
Do you sense that you are as insignificant 
as a bee fart in a bouquet of roses?
Well listen up Bunkie,
and remember,
the only person 
you are obligated to convince
of your greatness
is you...

12/13/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/5/2021 5:38:00 PM
WoW! Charlie! Tell it like it is. Loved your down to earth approach to this. The pic is perfect. lol God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 1/7/2021 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Judy...
Date: 12/14/2020 4:49:00 AM
WoW! Charlie, I enjoyed the buildup getting to your message. I found it encouraging in a tell in it like is fashion. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 12/14/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Alexis...
Date: 12/13/2020 3:26:00 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, you said it very well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2020 10:15:00 AM
Hello Charlie Smith, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 12/14/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 12/13/2020 2:30:00 PM
Good point Charlie! Great one :)
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 12/14/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thank You Heidi...
Date: 12/13/2020 11:35:00 AM
So true. Well said, Charlie.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 12/14/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Vijay...
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter