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Mud Puddle Has life handed you a kidney stone, Old Timer? Does the world treat you like a dead gnat in it's oatmeal? Some days, do you feel like a mud puddle in an ocean? Do you sense that you are as insignificant as a bee fart in a bouquet of roses? Well listen up Bunkie, and remember, the only person you are obligated to convince of your greatness is you... 12/13/2020

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Date: 1/5/2021 5:38:00 PM
WoW! Charlie! Tell it like it is. Loved your down to earth approach to this. The pic is perfect. lol God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/7/2021 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Judy...
Date: 12/14/2020 4:49:00 AM
WoW! Charlie, I enjoyed the buildup getting to your message. I found it encouraging in a tell in it like is fashion. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/14/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Alexis...
Date: 12/13/2020 3:26:00 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, you said it very well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2020 10:15:00 AM
Hello Charlie Smith, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 12/14/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 12/13/2020 2:30:00 PM
Good point Charlie! Great one :)
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Date: 12/14/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thank You Heidi...
Date: 12/13/2020 11:35:00 AM
So true. Well said, Charlie.
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Date: 12/14/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Vijay...

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