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Mud Bath (Fibonacci No. 2)

Feet stick on soil just like knives screaming homicide to a burdened inspector man; the earth is murdering my ankles, and I like it.

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Date: 6/8/2009 5:53:00 AM
This is incredible..I love the imagery...feet stick on soil just like knives....the ending is done well..good work.
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