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Mud - Where Are You

Humble mud, the cause of our existence, facing extinction. Have to pay and buy in towns Human race will end If we don't do something to increase uninhabited land cover 22.08.2021 Syllables checked at PS BS1

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/24/2021 10:27:00 AM

You are so right and so clever with this write - well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Apologies, I see congratulations are due with this superb write.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2021 11:21:00 PM

Reading this again. Great work using mud as matter and mind. Congratulations on your win!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2021 11:37:00 AM

Great poem, Rama; the message within is vital and alarming at the same time. My best wish for a win.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2021 9:34:00 AM

Yeah, yet another great work. By the way, about my 'Temple Pond', Thank you so much. In fact, I had made a great blunder in it at the very outset. I had not read the directions properly as usual. I wrote a poem on a social theme. (This time you had not commented on it as you were not aware of it). Later, it's on my own I found out my fault. I had deleted it and rectified it. (Placement is a different matter, as you know). But I feel funny about myself often.