Mt Seven Stars

The emerald hills and peaks form orderly layout,
The trails of immortals lead on to the top lookout;
Pavilions peep out through the mists and clouds restless,
Pine trees and bamboos there vie gently for greenness.
The crystal dripping water hits on the could ground of the cave deep,
Distant mountains in autumn are under the setting sun’s final sweep.
Lost in the mirage, I really need to know how
To find the way back to mortal world right now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Hello Charlie, reading this poem I have felt like i was on a journey, and i have enjoyed the trip. Have a nice evening my friend.
Wheatley Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Great imagery. You really took me to another place.
Way Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Wheatley, thank you for your support.
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