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Mrs You

I'm getting lost in you
I'm sinking deep
Pieces of me
Disentegrating
You hold me close
Day after day
I become what you want
While I fall away

I talk to you
I watch you listening
But don't get it
Something's missing
I look like me
But I've changed inside
I've conformed to your needs
And neglected mine

I'm a blurry copy
Controlled and subdued
I'm your wife
I'm Mrs. You

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2011

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Daver Austin Date: 11/10/2012 9:14:00 AM An awakening. Like it. Congrats on the selection. daver Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/6/2012 3:27:00 PM Congratulation on your win. I liked how it flowed nicely and easily read. Always be true to yourself Susan. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/6/2012 5:35:00 AM Congratulations on being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/28/2011 11:42:00 AM Never get lost in anyone so that you lose yourself, Susan. If by chance you have to find yourself after it's a long walk through "hell". Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/21/2011 7:37:00 AM This is what some men seek -- a woman they can control or mold into someone else. Hope this hasn't really happened to you, Susan. It's happened to some friends and they are never happy after making changes to conform to someone else's idea of the "perfect woman." Well stated! I also see congratulations are in order. Way to go, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/19/2011 1:14:00 PM Congratulations Susan, on your win in Linda's contest ;) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/19/2011 11:46:00 AM Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Susan Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/19/2011 7:11:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/19/2011 6:55:00 AM Many congrats on your win : ) Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/19/2011 4:43:00 AM Many congrats on your win, Susan. Lainie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/18/2011 8:45:00 PM Congrats Susan on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list has finally posted to view after some contest finalizing issues.. all fixed now..luv.. Login to Reply