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Mrs You

I'm getting lost in you I'm sinking deep Pieces of me Disentegrating You hold me close Day after day I become what you want While I fall away I talk to you I watch you listening But don't get it Something's missing I look like me But I've changed inside I've conformed to your needs And neglected mine I'm a blurry copy Controlled and subdued I'm your wife I'm Mrs. You

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Daver Austin

Date: 11/10/2012 9:14:00 AM

An awakening. Like it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/6/2012 3:27:00 PM

Congratulation on your win. I liked how it flowed nicely and easily read. Always be true to yourself Susan.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2012 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/28/2011 11:42:00 AM

Never get lost in anyone so that you lose yourself, Susan. If by chance you have to find yourself after it's a long walk through "hell". Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2011 7:37:00 AM

This is what some men seek -- a woman they can control or mold into someone else. Hope this hasn't really happened to you, Susan. It's happened to some friends and they are never happy after making changes to conform to someone else's idea of the "perfect woman." Well stated! I also see congratulations are in order. Way to go, dear. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/19/2011 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations Susan, on your win in Linda's contest ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/19/2011 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Susan. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 4/19/2011 6:55:00 AM

Many congrats on your win : )

Elaine George

Date: 4/19/2011 4:43:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, Susan. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2011 8:45:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list has finally posted to view after some contest finalizing issues.. all fixed now..luv..