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Mrs Potato Head
Mrs Potato Head's image surprised That can't be me it's someone else I see I still feel young in my heart and pint-sized The mirror tells lies, it’s true believe me. That can't be me it's someone else I see She'd an idea that'd get weight shifted The mirror tells lies, it’s true believe me Then cut herself to a chip, weight lifted. She'd an idea that'd get weight shifted I still feel young in my heart and pint-sized Then cut herself to a chip, weight lifted Mrs Potato Head's image surprised. 18th July 2021 Pantoum Rhyme 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper Image no. 3

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Date: 8/17/2021 11:02:00 AM
Ah, our eternal battle with the mirror and our mind's perceptions. Wonderfully done Belle! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun~~story/write. Love It. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:25:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:45:00 PM
Belle, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/14/2021 1:51:00 PM
Thank you for the placement Eve, the contest was lots of fun to do and a joy to read all the entries… Belle
Date: 7/22/2021 10:17:00 AM
Belle, your poem is amazing and makes me smile and think once more of how genuine and sincere you are - none of us are spring chickens. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/23/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, we were all spring chickens once upon a time, now it’s hard to admit a mirror never lies… blessings and hugs to you too ~ Belle
Date: 7/19/2021 6:28:00 AM
Enjoyed how you turned the theme into a delightful read. Clever write, Belle.
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Date: 7/19/2021 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Vijay so much, that’s most appreciated… Belle
Date: 7/19/2021 3:05:00 AM
Love it... such a awesome write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/19/2021 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Gina, God bless you always too… Belle
Date: 7/18/2021 11:19:00 PM
Cute funny and well-constructed pantoum. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:29:00 PM
Thanks a lot for that Victor… Belle
Date: 7/18/2021 9:31:00 PM
Very creative,clever take on contest theme. All the best
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Rama… Belle
Date: 7/18/2021 6:21:00 PM
Too cute Belle. Very clever write. Loved the pic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/18/2021 6:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Judy, Eve gave the choice of three pictures to write about for her contest… Belle
Date: 7/18/2021 3:18:00 PM
what a fun poem Belle!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I found it fun to do… Belle :-) Hugs xx
Date: 7/18/2021 2:17:00 PM
Glad you chose this one! Fun!
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Kim, I’m glad I chose it too, even though at first I hadn’t a clue what to do with it… Belle
Date: 7/18/2021 12:45:00 PM
- Creatively written, Belle - A pleasure to read ... the mirror does not speak the truth ... I'm sure :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, it’s good that mirrors don’t tell the truth, especially when like me there’s more time been spent than there is to spend… Belle
Date: 7/18/2021 12:45:00 PM
You make it look easy Belle, a form I struggle with. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:18:00 PM
It’s not that easy for me Tom, but now I’ve done a few it’s become less complicated. Thank you … Belle