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Mr Winter Sings

snow falls from the earth mr. wind sings a crisp tune tall fern-nods his head 01/16/2022 Contest: Winter Haiku Sponsor:Tania Kitchen

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/25/2022 9:01:00 AM

Hello Alexis - Hi. Through your words we see and hear mr winter sing. Your imagery is clear. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful day and weekend. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. I love a winter scene where there is no place to be and it can been seen from the inside (smile).

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2022 5:13:00 PM

just love the personification here.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/20/2022 5:54:00 AM

I like the imagery you present here, Alexis:) trees nodding their heads, lovely, congratulations:)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2022 3:18:00 AM

really pretty image these few words reveal, well penned Alexis. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2022 5:28:00 PM

I like that 'nod of the head.' Can just picture it. Nice 'ku, Alexis! ~ Gershon

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/19/2022 8:04:00 AM

Alexis, congratulations on your win! Charming Haiku...I especially love the last line. "tall fern-nods his head"....great imagery! :) Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/19/2022 7:12:00 AM

A pretty picture of winter, Alexis. Congratulations on your win. Like the image of Fern nodding its head. Love ~ Mala

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/18/2022 12:41:00 PM

Nicely done, Alexis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/18/2022 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Love your whimsical imagery. :) Paulette

Karen Croft

Date: 1/18/2022 3:01:00 AM

congrats on your win. very beautiful haiku!

Valsa George

Date: 1/17/2022 8:41:00 PM

There is so much of life in your winter haiku, Alexis. I enjoyed the image of wind singing a crisp tune. Congratulations on your win !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2022 8:06:00 PM

Love this! Especially the center line. Congratulations, Alexis!

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/17/2022 7:25:00 PM

I like the creative and whimsical tone of your haiku, Alexis! Congrats on your win! :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2022 4:59:00 PM

A very active bit of imagery, I can see that wind blowing snow around and that poor little wind-whipped fern...hope it lasts.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/17/2022 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations Alexis on your lyrical haiku win. Blessings xxoo

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/17/2022 12:58:00 PM

Wonderful animated haiku, so easy to picture this, but nigh on impossible to conjure up, exceptional work Alexis, congratulations cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2022 12:10:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Alexis ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/17/2022 10:10:00 AM

Back with congrats Alexis, winter isn't over until Mr Winter stops singing lol. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/17/2022 9:46:00 AM

Mr Winter does what he wants. VICTOR

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/17/2022 9:33:00 AM

Alexis, what a delightful, musical picture. We have several ferns in our yard and in the winter they do "nod." Like you I hear winter sing! Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings for the new year.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/17/2022 8:57:00 AM

What beautiful description here. I can see a lake in winter as the cold breeze blows through the reeds. Nice. God Bless, JB

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/17/2022 8:51:00 AM

Snowy bright beautiful haiku, Alexis. Your pen warms the heart on a cold winter's day, my dear friend. Love and more love always.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/17/2022 8:32:00 AM

Alexis, congratulations on your bronze placement with your cute and creative poem!

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/17/2022 8:51:00 AM

Hi Tania, You hosted a good contest. I enjoyed being a part of it. Thanks for my placement in your contest. Have a great day- Alexis

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/17/2022 6:14:00 AM

Wonderfully composed Haiku, Alexis. Best wishes for the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2022 1:53:00 PM

We had a little snow today, but the weather conditions were not good for it to stick. We don't do well when it snows because we are not prepared since it only happens about every 5 to 10 years and then it is usually only a small amount. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara