Mr Pathetic

I'm talking to you
mr pathetic
you dopey
half-baked
imbecile
every time you say
a word
i'm about to throw up
from your moronic
dumb-ass
pointless
ideas
go to school
and educate yourself
you 
bugged-out
and retarded
brainless...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mac Donald Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Oh, that's an angry write, Dino. Is that why your face is red? (JOKING)!!!! Actually it's not kind of me, nor funny.:( I suppose my mom could be blamed for this. When I'd feel surly, she'd say it looks like you've eaten cat doo. Well, I don't know what that tastes like, but it sure sounded funny! Wishing you the best, Mikki
Amadore Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Forceful, truthful rant...attention getting and honest...
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 12:51 PM
I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Dino. Love, Carol
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