Caren Krutsinger Poet Limerick

Mr Mcbanties Takes a Bad Turn

Weary old frog a cousin of aunties
Chased a young fly named Mr. McBanties
Mr. B was too quick for him
Took a bad turn on a whim
Ended up in my neighbor’s pink panties

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Bill Baker March 24, 2022 at 5:16 PM He was just finishing out the Limerick with a closing turn. Bill Caren Krutsinger March 24, 2022 at 5:29 PM Exactly! Can't you see that clothesline jumping?

L Milton Hankins March 24, 2022 at 12:05 PM Ah, that's a good one. Loved the last line. Caren Krutsinger March 24, 2022 at 5:30 PM I started with it, because the last line is what makes a limerick good.