Get Your Premium Membership

Mr Mcbanties Takes a Bad Turn

Weary old frog a cousin of aunties Chased a young fly named Mr. McBanties Mr. B was too quick for him Took a bad turn on a whim Ended up in my neighbor’s pink panties

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/24/2022 5:16:00 PM
He was just finishing out the Limerick with a closing turn. Bill
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/24/2022 5:29:00 PM
Exactly! Can't you see that clothesline jumping?
Date: 3/24/2022 12:05:00 PM
Ah, that's a good one. Loved the last line.
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/24/2022 5:30:00 PM
I started with it, because the last line is what makes a limerick good.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things