Mr Incomplete

You used to be a part of me
Now all I do is make believe
What friends are left, now all they see
Is how my life is incomplete

I went ahead and changed my name
To Incomplete as of late
At any given time of day
That's the statement that I make

Through all intents and purposes
I'll make it through the worst of this
Remembering our relationship
And all that I poured into it

Now as Mr. Incomplete
I walk alone along these city streets
Remembering the better half of me
And how it all used to be

Things have never been the same
Since with your help I changed my name
Want you to know it's not to late
To change it back if you'll just say

But as it is in all of this
I'm living out my emptiness
All of this came more or less
On the day that you left

You made me out to who I am
That, no more than half a man
Mr. Incomplete is where I stand
Known far and wide throughout the land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hoffman Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:19 PM
It is a sad one Mike! I think theres a lot of people out there that this poem is referring to! Another good one, just sad:)
Hauser  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thanks
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:14 PM
I had a huge lump in my throat reading this ... it is so sad Mike:-( hugs Jan xx
Hauser  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Thanks...not about me of course, I've been happily married for over 30 years..and my wife's been happy most of that time!
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