Mr Grey

A wolf in disguise by the name of Mr. Grey
I am all to willing to be his submissive prey

His dangerous game is pleasure and pain
Others look at me as if I were insane

A dominant presence, he stands on the stage
Sweet anticipation as I press against the bars of my cage

This is not right, too different and strange
Oh, but I can't get enough of these ropes, whips, and chains

He shows me worlds not of this Earth
I am the drug that satisfies and sparks his thirst

Extosy are my wrists containing his seal
This is life and what it truly means to feel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/18/2012 10:44:00 PM
Interesting work! A very entertaining read. Thanks for stopping by and thanks for posting this wonderful composition. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/27/2012 12:25:00 PM
i agree im not to sure about the whips and chains but i to think the sex side of any relationship should be exciteing i guees you have already read my sensaul enjoyment on this subject cool werite again xx davidscott
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Date: 9/27/2012 2:33:00 PM
Thanks I welcome any kind of feedback. The poem is based on a book called "Fifty Shades of Grey"
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