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Written 18 September 2024

Moving up one's journey uphill, Though for many a soul a thrill, Is a scary endless struggle Verging on a daily battle. One may expect thorns on the way And a scorching sun through the day, One may witness wild winds uphill With not a spot oneself to shield; One may expect rough, rugged roads With no single voice one to goad, One may expect to face a cliff Or down a precipice to slip; One may expect blows from vile men Or a stab on the back from friends, Envious of one's seat to take Or eager to snarl at one's fate. Moving alone up a steep hill Calls for zeal, power of the will Courage coupled with bravery And the gem of divine mercy. When our path is shrouded with doubt Let us give a positive shout To clear away any dark cloud That of ourselves we may be proud; When along a road we do fall, Let us surely rise after all, Pursue our journey till the end With spirit of a real man. When the top of the hill seems far Let us think of the distant star Some billions of light years' away Shedding light to brighten our way; Let our end goal be the hilltop, Instead of a slippery slope, Gaze at the distant horizon Where emerges the rising sun.

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Date: 9/19/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hello Krishnanand Guptar, this is a wonderful poem. i enjoyed to read. It will be my fav. blessing my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2024 3:04:00 PM
Hello Krishnanand, I am happy to hear i made your day brighter.Thank you Kkrishnanand enjoy your evening my friend. God Bless. /Darlene/
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 9/19/2024 11:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot Darlene for visiting my page and appreciating the above poem. Your very positive comments have made my day. May divine blessings rest upon you and those near and dear to you. Wish you a pleasant afternoon.

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