Moving To the Maldives

I am moving to the Maldives Islands
Where is that?
The middle of the Indian Ocean
What is there?
Temperatures between seventy-six and eighty-six degrees

Her parents were against it
It did not make sense
It was on the other side of the world
They visited her in December
And decided to stay
For the rest of their lives
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

George Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 9:38 PM
This island lying in the Indian Ocean between India and China is a tourist's paradise who wish to sneak away from the chaos and confusion of city life. Floating in the serene ocean waters will be a heavenly experience. So whoever wish to, can confidently proceed, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 7:49 PM
It sounds marvelous Valsa
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace