Moving Out

When I moved from my parents’ house,
I really couldn’t wait 
To start my life; the leaving was
A cause to celebrate.

A memory occurs to me:
When I approached my mom
To tell her of my plans to move,
I’d not expected calm.

I’d practiced in my head the things
That I had planned to say
When she would protest, practically
Demanding that I stay.

Instead, she offered me my bed 
And dishes, pans and pots.
To realize she was ready, too,
Well, just connect the dots.

I liked my folks; we got along,
Yet it was time to split.
I had a job and never
Second-guessed things, not a bit.

Today it seems that, more and more,
Kids don’t renounce their claim
On their childhood homes and that, to me,
Is really quite a shame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:45 PM
It is a shame that many hold on to those apron strings way to long. Independence creates for better humans.
Peck Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 6:54 PM
That sure seems to be the trend. For one thing is the expense. I can't believe the cost of houses now. Still, I agree, they need to move on!
Rolland Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 3:02 PM
so is life, we learn every time, with parents, while parents, great and touching poem, thanks
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