Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

Moving On

Moving On

Unfulfilled dreams and wasted time,
found out the hard way that you were never mine.
Moonlit nights must have made me loca,
stupid me, next time I’ll definitely be smarter.

How could I ever think I was your love? 
My mistake - I was a blind judge.
Took me a while to see through your silly, fake smile;
took me a while to see through your practiced guile.

A masterful seducer, bet you think you are so cool,
yes, I feel like such a damn fool.
Weaving a web of deliberate lies and deceit,
your best subject is “How to Cheat, Cheat, Cheat!”

Don Juan has nothing over you,
your middle name is “Master of the Game Two.”  
But never mind, Lothario, revenge is a dish served cold,
and you're nothing to me now that I've broken through the mold. 

Blowing your cover,
it’s your loss, lover.
‘Cause I will certainly recover 
- Faster than you think,
- Faster than you can blink,
- Faster than a shipwreck, you’re the one who will sink.

But forget you, fool, I AM MOVING ON!
I’m outta here – GONE!


05-08-2014

Contest:      Moving On (09-12-2014)
Sponsor:     Anthony Slausen
Placement:  8th

Contest:      Slamming Season (06-17-2014)
Sponsor:     Poet Destroyer A
Placement:  10th

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Brenda Meier-Hans September 13, 2014 at 10:24 AM Great poem that shows so much courage. Congratulations on your win Pandita Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 2:38 PM Brenda, thank you very much for your kind compliments and encouragment! Pandita

Faye Gibson September 13, 2014 at 8:26 AM I like yours, too. Great goodbye, Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 2:37 PM Thanks very much, Faye. I am delighted that you like this one! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux September 13, 2014 at 8:22 AM Good for you, I like your spirit! Congratulations on your win Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 2:36 PM Thank you, thank you, dear Richard! Warmest regards. Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 12, 2014 at 11:59 PM Wow Pandita very inspiring bold write! That's the way it shud be! Damn you I move on! Congrats on huge win! Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 7:45 AM Dr. Upma, many thanks for your kind congratulatory words! Pandita

Kika Ayala August 29, 2014 at 10:36 PM That's the way to do it - don't tolerate crap from any one! Excellent write! Kika Pandita Sietesantos August 29, 2014 at 11:40 PM Thanks much, Kika. I appreciate your support and encouragement! Pandita

Bongani Zungu July 30, 2014 at 7:45 AM Wow, awosome piece. the concluding verse is out of this world. well penned Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos July 30, 2014 at 8:32 AM Thank you so much Bongani, my friend for the sweet compliment which I very much appreciate!

Robert Nehls June 25, 2014 at 6:24 PM Pretty powerful stuff, Pandita. People who choose to live like that are continuously sinking And don't know it. They deceive themselves and will never find the happiness that others achieve. well written and very strong..... Robert. Pandita Sietesantos June 25, 2014 at 8:54 PM Thank you, dear Robert, for the wonderful kind compliments, support, and encouragement! Warmest regards.

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 2:58 PM Hi Pandita, thank you for the bottom reply... Linda

A.E. Rivenbark June 18, 2014 at 3:30 AM Congrats on your win! Excellent write! Pandita Sietesantos June 18, 2014 at 8:25 AM Thank you so much, my friend, for visiting and for your wonderful compliments! Kindest regards!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 17, 2014 at 5:04 AM Congratulations on a fine win in slamming contest, Pandita Pandita Sietesantos June 17, 2014 at 7:20 AM Thank you so very much, Dr. Ram for your kind comments! Kind regards.

Poet Destroyer A June 17, 2014 at 1:04 AM Pandita.... Congratulations:) Thank you for the Slam Season Support... Stop by and enjoy my newest poem "Dear Mr President" OR my latest blog "Prettiest Poet Girl" if you like. No pressure. :):):) Hugs & Love ~Always & Forever~ LINDA Pandita Sietesantos June 17, 2014 at 7:19 AM Hi Linda, I am delighted to place in your contest! Thank you very much! And I will certainly stop by soon! Best wishes.

Robin Davis June 5, 2014 at 10:54 PM Pandita You go girl. Get rid of that dirty rotten two timer. And find someone who will love you truthfully. Thank you for the great comment on my Butterfly poem Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2014 at 6:30 AM Hi Robin, that right - no time to put up with crap:)! Thanks for visiting and for your wonderful comments!!!

Louis Rams May 12, 2014 at 11:14 AM TOUCHE ! SEND HIM TO WHERE HE MUST GO - TO ANOTHER PICTURE SHOW. Louis Rams May 12, 2014 at 7:06 PM then it's a double TOUCHE Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2014 at 11:37 AM Louis, thank you. That's exactly what I did! No tolerance for that kind of man!