S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Free verse

Moving House 1

Moving house

Breaking news, time- brandished
My auntie moving house
Joining the last of the dots of blandishments

Left dangling by kin far and wide
While she coasted in the east

Gonna cease to be where 
Her great grandpa felled
Trees to make doors for a dwelling, 
Which helplessly  helped the exodus

By Tamravarni
Which is also river like her
And in movement like her intent.


8 jul 13, Freeverse

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For Skat's Freeverse contest

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Lucilla Carrillo July 12, 2013 at 7:39 AM This is good Jag. I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Nette Onclaud July 8, 2013 at 11:42 AM jag, the pang of moving is so well expressed here... your end lines clinches this read with a sense of surrender... how superb!..:) hugggs