Moving Forward

Something has swept our summer, your face,
Along, away.
Constantly morphing, they cannot be fixed
In memory’s embrace.

There are too many yous,
Too many emotions:
Silly looks, laughter, rebukes, laughter.
Laughter sweeps them all along, away.

Your laugh, the one constant,
A great gasping gust of breath
Chopped into sound bytes,
Sweeps it all along, away.

Think I almost have you,
Puzzle unraveled, repaired.
Then you laugh a cavernous smile;
My hope swept along, away.

You have too many taste buds.
Love and life are dancing on your tongue,
Sweeping you along, away,
Closer to God.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/3/2009 3:57:00 PM
nicely done, inspriational
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Date: 9/2/2009 7:31:00 AM
I'm sorry- but I dropped my jaw and fell into pieces. I love this, I love the last stanza...."You have too many taste buds. Love and life are dancing on your tongue, Sweeping you along, away, Closer to God." what is this? I'm swept away, too. Smile. Love, Sara
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Katie. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2009 10:46:00 AM
beautiful poetry..... enjoy your day..:)
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Date: 8/28/2009 10:37:00 AM
This is lovely, rather wistful and magic!! Well done!! ~ Carrie
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