Moving Day

It’s clear after this perfunctory bout, I’m packin’ your things and you’re movin’ out! On our first day we both made such grand vows, now I hear you’re stepping out to carouse. That Megan teen’s “preggers” and they say it’s yours; how fast can I toss your butt through the doors? You promised to love (in good times only?) Megan’s folks are movin’; guess you’ll be lonely. Think you’re the gold ring on all carousels? Stick around, I’ll muster a few more decibels. I’ll toss ya a bone; go fetch it Fido. Keep running, don’t come home. That’s a no-no! I’d expect loyalty from “man’s best friend” Now scoot! I need a laugh from your back end.
*Written for Susan Burch’s “CHEATER, CHEATER” Contest. October 24, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/2/2011 2:18:00 PM
LOL, love it! I think there are a few poems I've missed somehow - goes to look...
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Date: 10/28/2011 11:24:00 PM
Turn the table on these cheaters, Carolyn. I love the dog parallel....that's what they are-dirty dogs! Fun and full of "don;t mess with Carolyn emotion." Hope u are feeling well. What a Humdinger! ha ha.
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Date: 10/28/2011 11:16:00 AM
Wowzers Carolyn ! Funny one here ! I had a blast reading it love ! Much love, james
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Date: 10/26/2011 12:33:00 PM
A very good poem that just gets better the further the reader gets into it! I didn't see the dog until you threw him a bone...lol! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/26/2011 10:32:00 AM
LNC..Im laughing...love the last line. BG
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Date: 10/26/2011 6:47:00 AM
LONG TIME NO SEE MA, THIS POEM TELLS ME THAT CHEATING DOES PAY.
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Date: 10/26/2011 5:02:00 AM
I can hear his feet hitting the pavement. Tony
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Date: 10/25/2011 10:59:00 PM
That is funnnnnny! :-)
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Date: 10/25/2011 9:36:00 PM
Ha ha, that is such a great write, Carolyn, I just love it! The humor is quite welcome to handle the gloom of the separation they're going through! Lovely write!!
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