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Beauty sought, and being used to gain control, blinds those who seek the beautiful companion, and the beautiful companion, uses that beauty to soon take what ever the seeker has. Then discards them and moves on.

Tangle, Tangle Lips and Eyes Ears Deceived Truth like Lies Power Seek Power Use Only to Hurt Not Amuse Captures What I Most Desire My Rivals Fall Before My Feet Words That Bring Victory Sweet My Face And Form So Pristine Internally A Cold Machine.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 12/9/2016 10:43:00 PM

Good job!!!!.... congrats on being featured.....

Kieran Pavlick
Date: 12/10/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thank You !

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/31/2016 7:28:00 PM

I can relate to this write so much, great write Kieran, thanks

Kieran Pavlick
Date: 12/10/2016 9:52:00 AM

One cannot go through life, in this day and age,without being slammed at least once.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/31/2016 10:43:00 AM

Not a nice person. Good depiction with your rhyme. Thanks for sharing Kieran...

Kieran Pavlick
Date: 3/31/2016 12:30:00 PM

yes, she was a person being guided by a feeling of betrayal. Yet sought love. Her bait was fashion, makeup, perfume and saying, " I don't need to be married." Seemingly unceasing sex. Until after 10 years, she has built up her bank account, and paid her mortgage, and then kick you out. Prstitutes might be labeled, "Rent-A Tute." She would have been a "Lease-A-Tute."