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Move In the Light of Hope

MOVE IN THE LIGHT OF HOPE

On life's spring of chance--
pulled in soaking tears
by etched braids of loss,
I stood tough though scarce
to reach high my DREAMS. . .

Arched brows. Frowns. Tests
creeping quiet
head over heels,
they rob some life. 

Yet, be still
do move on

Believe
in light. . .

H - O - P - E!
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©O.E. Guillermo 
 09:51  am. January 05, 2015

Sponsor: Dr.Ram Mehta 
Contest Name: Diminished Hexaverse
Placed 3rd 

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/23/2015 12:29:00 PM Excellent how you approached the theme, Olive! Love it...congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/19/2015 8:19:00 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :) I like your too when I read it,, :)

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/21/2015 11:48:00 PM This is excellent ,congrats Olive...huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/19/2015 8:24:00 AM thanks much.. :)!

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/20/2015 4:30:00 PM !!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/20/2015 1:02:00 PM Take me to the light Olive. Smiles and congratulations on your fine win, James :)x Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/19/2015 8:20:00 AM I shall try in every way to take someone like you in the light of hope.. :)! thanks much JAmes.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/20/2015 11:10:00 AM Congratulations Olive> love-rajat Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/19/2015 8:26:00 AM thanks Rajat.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/19/2015 10:13:00 PM A very positive n inspiring write dear Olive! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/19/2015 8:25:00 AM thank you dr. Upma.. :)!

Paul Callus Date: 1/19/2015 5:25:00 PM Back to congratulate you on this lovely win Olive_eloi....and to remind you of that muffin:) hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/19/2015 8:23:00 AM sorry PAul I ate all the muffins.. :D!

Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2015 12:32:00 PM Wonderful poem Olive many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/25/2015 7:50:00 AM thanks much Jan. :)!hugs too. :D!

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/19/2015 11:10:00 AM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/25/2015 4:53:00 AM thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 1/19/2015 10:04:00 AM Hope is that beaming light. Congratulations on your win Olive. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/25/2015 4:53:00 AM Thanks much Brenda.. :) appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/12/2015 1:07:00 PM Lovely and enrapturing to belief and hope... Verlena Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/13/2015 3:40:00 AM thanks much Vetlena.. :)God bless us all

Liam Mcdaid Date: 1/9/2015 1:11:00 PM beautifully painted olive hope always shines bless you excellent pen dear friend Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/9/2015 6:53:00 PM it is Liam.. :)! Thanks much.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus Date: 1/7/2015 3:13:00 PM Very impressive and inspiring, Olive_eloi. Light is hope is light. Some dreams might fall by the wayside, but others we can make them come true by keeping our faith in them. Hope is the last thing to die. // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/9/2015 1:00:00 AM thanks much PAul.. :) thanks you for ever support plus your encouragements.. :)! GOd bless you.. :) I'll bake you a muffin! :P

Emile Pinet Date: 1/6/2015 7:42:00 PM Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong, spiritually and emotionally uplifting. Emile. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/9/2015 6:52:00 PM thanks Much EMile.. :)! I appreciate your drop by.. :)! God bless you.. :)!

Harry Horsman Date: 1/6/2015 11:03:00 AM love this form of poetry, and your wonderful words fit the shape superbly... Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/8/2015 5:24:00 AM Thank you for your comments HArry. :) GOd bless you.. :)!

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/6/2015 10:48:00 AM Very good layout of your work..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/8/2015 5:21:00 AM thanks much Sara.. :)! GOd bless you always.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/5/2015 10:37:00 PM It really does give a feeling of someone having high hope, Olive! Nicely done. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:36:00 AM Thanks much Andie.. :)! God bless you.. :)!

James Fraser Date: 1/5/2015 1:13:00 PM Believe in light, hope. A few words that appease many, and mean so much. Fine Diminished Hexaverse Olive :) James :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 1:04:00 AM Thanks much James.. Indeed it is.. :)! there is this one Bible verse that there is faith, hope and love.. but the greatest of this is love.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/5/2015 11:27:00 AM - Wonderful poem, dear Olive!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/5/2015 8:47:00 PM thanks much Anne Lise.. :) I appreciate it. :) hugs and hugs .. :D!

David Meade Date: 1/4/2015 10:02:00 PM Awesome my dear friend -- to dream with light and hope enriches any life. May all you all dream and be filled with hope. 7 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/5/2015 9:04:00 AM thanks much David. :)