Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Move In the Light of Hope

MOVE IN THE LIGHT OF HOPE

On life's spring of chance--
pulled in soaking tears
by etched braids of loss,
I stood tough though scarce
to reach high my DREAMS. . .

Arched brows. Frowns. Tests
creeping quiet
head over heels,
they rob some life. 

Yet, be still
do move on

Believe
in light. . .

H - O - P - E!
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©O.E. Guillermo 
 09:51  am. January 05, 2015

Sponsor: Dr.Ram Mehta 
Contest Name: Diminished Hexaverse
Placed 3rd 

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 23, 2015 at 12:29 PM Excellent how you approached the theme, Olive! Love it...congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 8:19 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :) I like your too when I read it,, :)

Kayod5 Kayode January 21, 2015 at 11:48 PM This is excellent ,congrats Olive...huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 8:24 AM thanks much.. :)!

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2015 at 4:30 PM !!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

James Fraser January 20, 2015 at 1:02 PM Take me to the light Olive. Smiles and congratulations on your fine win, James :)x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 8:20 AM I shall try in every way to take someone like you in the light of hope.. :)! thanks much JAmes.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 20, 2015 at 11:10 AM Congratulations Olive> love-rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 8:26 AM thanks Rajat.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 19, 2015 at 10:13 PM A very positive n inspiring write dear Olive! Congrats on big win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 8:25 AM thank you dr. Upma.. :)!

Paul Callus January 19, 2015 at 5:25 PM Back to congratulate you on this lovely win Olive_eloi....and to remind you of that muffin:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 8:23 AM sorry PAul I ate all the muffins.. :D!

Jan Allison January 19, 2015 at 12:32 PM Wonderful poem Olive many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 25, 2015 at 7:50 AM thanks much Jan. :)!hugs too. :D!

Dr.Ram Mehta January 19, 2015 at 11:10 AM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 25, 2015 at 4:53 AM thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans January 19, 2015 at 10:04 AM Hope is that beaming light. Congratulations on your win Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 25, 2015 at 4:53 AM Thanks much Brenda.. :) appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Verlena S. Walker January 12, 2015 at 1:07 PM Lovely and enrapturing to belief and hope... Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 13, 2015 at 3:40 AM thanks much Vetlena.. :)God bless us all

Liam Mcdaid January 9, 2015 at 1:11 PM beautifully painted olive hope always shines bless you excellent pen dear friend Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 9, 2015 at 6:53 PM it is Liam.. :)! Thanks much.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 3:13 PM Very impressive and inspiring, Olive_eloi. Light is hope is light. Some dreams might fall by the wayside, but others we can make them come true by keeping our faith in them. Hope is the last thing to die. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 9, 2015 at 1:00 AM thanks much PAul.. :) thanks you for ever support plus your encouragements.. :)! GOd bless you.. :) I'll bake you a muffin! :P

Emile Pinet January 6, 2015 at 7:42 PM Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong, spiritually and emotionally uplifting. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 9, 2015 at 6:52 PM thanks Much EMile.. :)! I appreciate your drop by.. :)! God bless you.. :)!

Harry Horsman January 6, 2015 at 11:03 AM love this form of poetry, and your wonderful words fit the shape superbly... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 8, 2015 at 5:24 AM Thank you for your comments HArry. :) GOd bless you.. :)!

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2015 at 10:48 AM Very good layout of your work..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 8, 2015 at 5:21 AM thanks much Sara.. :)! GOd bless you always.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2015 at 10:37 PM It really does give a feeling of someone having high hope, Olive! Nicely done. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:36 AM Thanks much Andie.. :)! God bless you.. :)!

James Fraser January 5, 2015 at 1:13 PM Believe in light, hope. A few words that appease many, and mean so much. Fine Diminished Hexaverse Olive :) James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 1:04 AM Thanks much James.. Indeed it is.. :)! there is this one Bible verse that there is faith, hope and love.. but the greatest of this is love.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2015 at 11:27 AM - Wonderful poem, dear Olive!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 5, 2015 at 8:47 PM thanks much Anne Lise.. :) I appreciate it. :) hugs and hugs .. :D!

David Meade January 4, 2015 at 10:02 PM Awesome my dear friend -- to dream with light and hope enriches any life. May all you all dream and be filled with hope. 7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 5, 2015 at 9:04 AM thanks much David. :)