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Move In the Light of Hope

MOVE IN THE LIGHT OF HOPE On life's spring of chance-- pulled in soaking tears by etched braids of loss, I stood tough though scarce to reach high my DREAMS. . . Arched brows. Frowns. Tests creeping quiet head over heels, they rob some life. Yet, be still do move on Believe in light. . . H - O - P - E! _________________________ ©O.E. Guillermo 09:51 am. January 05, 2015 Sponsor: Dr.Ram Mehta Contest Name: Diminished Hexaverse Placed 3rd

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/23/2015 12:29:00 PM

Excellent how you approached the theme, Olive! Love it...congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:19:00 AM

thanks much Rhonda.. :) I like your too when I read it,, :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/21/2015 11:48:00 PM

This is excellent ,congrats Olive...huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:24:00 AM

thanks much.. :)!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2015 4:30:00 PM

!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

James Fraser

Date: 1/20/2015 1:02:00 PM

Take me to the light Olive. Smiles and congratulations on your fine win, James :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:20:00 AM

I shall try in every way to take someone like you in the light of hope.. :)! thanks much JAmes.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/20/2015 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations Olive> love-rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:26:00 AM

thanks Rajat.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/19/2015 10:13:00 PM

A very positive n inspiring write dear Olive! Congrats on big win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:25:00 AM

thank you dr. Upma.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2015 5:25:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on this lovely win Olive_eloi....and to remind you of that muffin:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:23:00 AM

sorry PAul I ate all the muffins.. :D!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2015 12:32:00 PM

Wonderful poem Olive many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/25/2015 7:50:00 AM

thanks much Jan. :)!hugs too. :D!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/19/2015 11:10:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/25/2015 4:53:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/19/2015 10:04:00 AM

Hope is that beaming light. Congratulations on your win Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/25/2015 4:53:00 AM

Thanks much Brenda.. :) appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/12/2015 1:07:00 PM

Lovely and enrapturing to belief and hope... Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/13/2015 3:40:00 AM

thanks much Vetlena.. :)God bless us all

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/9/2015 1:11:00 PM

beautifully painted olive hope always shines bless you excellent pen dear friend

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/9/2015 6:53:00 PM

it is Liam.. :)! Thanks much.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2015 3:13:00 PM

Very impressive and inspiring, Olive_eloi. Light is hope is light. Some dreams might fall by the wayside, but others we can make them come true by keeping our faith in them. Hope is the last thing to die. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/9/2015 1:00:00 AM

thanks much PAul.. :) thanks you for ever support plus your encouragements.. :)! GOd bless you.. :) I'll bake you a muffin! :P